I HOPE SOME OF YOU COULD REVISE IT FOR ME.I NEED PRCTICE ENGLISH WRITING.I'M A foreigner。

       do people always think censorship accepable?some hold an affirmative answer because censorship can keep our world in good order rather than in a mess.Iconcede their opinion.neverthelss,from my perspecctive,too bluntly censorial system is sometimes inappropriate.

      the primary reason why I hold this opinion is that censorship restricts the rights of the individual and personal development.for example,management during one's childhood may misguide his or her ability to discern outside world.for example,the words“DO NOT PICK FLOWERS""DOGS MAY BITE YOU"make child confused even worried about whether he or she should stand close to this beautiful but"dangerous"nature.Similiarly,students in middle sxhool would lost their ability of creative stufy if they are  totally controlled by the monotonous standards.Moreove,too much rules in a company may make the  enthusiastic  staff lose momentum in labourious business when they are punished for having been late or exanmined to prevent some public-owned proporties from stolen.

an equally essential pactor which deserves peopel attenting is that the socil regulation can not always pervade every aspects of the changeable surroundings.Consider,for instance,steal.The tipstaff  in many country will punish anyone who steal,even a boy commited a venial offense that only steal a loaf of bread to feed his starving sister.the example above shows how unfeeling and insufficient the law is to satisfy civil needs.From the worldwide,the censorship can no longer make a difference.During world war 2,soldiers died and heritage was damaged.In some senses,each side stole lifes,properities,lands and cultrue from the other,but no rule.....